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Thursday, April 14, 2016

latoiyas trip



On Friday we  went to  the  marae it's called Ngati Moki when I got of  the bus and waited  at the gate. we got a  song it  was a welcoming on  the marae.Then we walked slowly and we went in the marae. we stood near the chairs then sat down .Then  had kai .then done are mihi. then  played on the playground.   then went  inside .then had lunch.
then  went to the church and looked at the cemetery.
we tried  looking for this 102  lady the. people who were there Fiona and Uncle Pat and 2 others the man greeted us. and Mr Wilkinson talked.  we also pressed noses.
it was kind of weird .but we had to do it I liked it a we bit.
I did not know how to do it. but I done well. I love the marae
It was fun I loved it
By Latoiya .
 

5 comments:

  1. That was a good story about the Marae Latoiya! I really liked it!

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  2. wow this writing is awesome latoiya.

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  3. Nice writing Toiya you done real well.good girl.

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  4. you need to make more fullstops Latoiya

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  5. Hi Toya it's Alyscia again,Great work with you're Story.You're next step is to not use then to many times ok.

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